blackout
corrosive waters
interrupted one track mind
breaking train of thoughts
– – – – –
regrets
coach rose from the depths
freighting haunted memories
ghostly horns echoed
I believe Susi really outdo herself this time with the image prompt. This really got my gears moving (pun? pun-ish?) and I came up with two senryuu. It sounds rough and the meters seem a little off, but I like it.
If you are interested, the prompt the linked below.
PLEASE follow them! I’d hate to not see your piece(s) represented in the recap the following week! Confused? Any questions – email me at sushibocks@gmail.com
For more detailed information, read about this challenge here.
- Create a standard three line, 5/7/5 syllable count haiku/senryu
- Deadline to submit for this week’s challenge will be 11:59pm 7/27/19
- Up to 3 pieces permitted
- Link your piece to this “IWH Haiku/Senryu Challenge” on your post
- Always give photo credit if there is one
From the Window Seat 
No, my friend, you’ve outdone yourself! These are really good takes on the image. Blackout is my favorite. 🙂 Thanks for playing, Tien!!
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Awwww, shucks! *blushes* Thank you!
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You’re welcome! 🙂
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Two excellent takes on the prompt. Perhaps I prefer the first one best, but it’s a close call 🙂
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Aw, thank you!
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Lovely take on the prompt Tien. Special mention for the first 👍
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Haha, thank you!
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Well Done!
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Thank you!
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