
#CCC32
A Message from Heaven
“Are you sure, Papa? Mama works here?”
He looked down at his four-year-old son. “Yes, Mama works here. She is just busy. Don’t forget she’s a superhero, always helping people,” he smiled.
“But when will she reply to my letters?” little Ben pouted. “It has been so long.”
“She’s working for God now, Ben. Of course it will take her longer to reply,” he swallowed a lump in his throat. “There are many people out there that needs her help, not just in the hospital.”
“OK, Papa. I always know Mama is a superhero,” Ben patted his father’s hand. Just like the past three months, Ben walked up to the letter box in front of the tower and put his letter in.
He paused.
“Papa! Papa! There’s a letter!” Ben cried excitedly. “It’s from Mama!”
He smiled sadly at Ben’s excitement.
He still did not know how to tell Ben.
(150 words)
If you are interested, the prompt is linked below.
Here’s how it works:
Every Wednesday I post a photo (this week it’s that one above.)
You respond with something CREATIVE
Here are some suggestions:
- An answering photo
- A cartoon
- A joke
- A caption
- An anecdote
- A short story (flash fiction)
- A poem
- A newly minted proverb, adage or saying
- An essay
- A song—the lyrics or the performance
You have plenty of scope and only two criteria:
- Your creative offering is indeed yours
- Your writing is kept to 150 words or less
If you post a link in the comments section of this post I’ll be able to find it
If you include Crimson’s Creative Challenge as a heading, WP Search will find it (theory)
If you tag it #CCC others should be able to find it by ‘Searching’ in the WP Reader (fingers crossed)
Prompt: Crimson’s Creative Challenge #32
That is so sad. Well done. A marvel take on the photo
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Thank you 🙂
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Such a sad story.
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I’m glad that it touches you so
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I so hope the letter was not a piece of junk mail… I want to believe it was a note from his mother.
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I hope so too. No matter what, little Ben is still stronger than he looks 🙂
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