
CCC#28
When They Came
That night, they came for the witch, dragging her out by her hair. She screamed in pain but they did not care; bloodlust was in the air. Her charge? She lived at the edge of the village, near the forest; villagers saw how she kept to herself, how she fed the animals and how animals behaved docilely around her.
Surely that had to be black magic at work!
She was a filthy and sobbing mess by the time they tied her to the stake. No one would help her; men were easily manipulated and women believed in gossips.
She prayed.
And prayed.
And prayed until the fire consumed her body, leaving behind nothing but ashes.
Satisfied, the villagers went back to their homes that night and their daily lives the following day.
The world showed no compassion – to that woman, to her house and to the animals.
(148 words)
Just a little dark tale. My mind wandered to places where it usually does not go…
If you are interested, the prompt is linked below.
Welcome to my weekly challenge—open to all—just for FUN, FUN, FUN
Here’s how it works:
Every Wednesday I post a photo (this week it’s that one above.)
You respond with something CREATIVE
Here are some suggestions:
- An answering photo
- A cartoon
- A joke
- A caption
- An anecdote
- A short story (flash fiction)
- A poem
- A newly minted proverb, adage or saying
- An essay
- A song—the lyrics or the performance
You have plenty of scope and only two criteria:
- Your creative offering is indeed yours
- Your writing is kept to 150 words or less
If you post a link in the comments section of this post I’ll be able to find it
If you include Crimson’s Creative Challenge as a heading, WP Search will find it (theory)
If you tag it #CCC others should be able to find it by ‘Searching’ in the WP Reader (fingers crossed)
Prompt: Crimson’s Creative Challenge #28
Oh, I really like this.
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Thank you for reading. I’m glad you enjoy it. 😊
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It is a very insightful story, your message of non-compassion nor understanding for another human being is rampant in today’s world.
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Thank you for reading. Understanding one another can be difficult at times, especially if one party is not open to dialogue…
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Yes, indeed.
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This just broke my heart as it is a tale of just how some people can be treated based on differences, especially nowadays.
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Yes, Tre. And village is much closer to all of us than we realise…
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Yes, it is.
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Rather chilling.
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Isn’t it? Thank you for reading. 🙂
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I like your story. I’m not sure I agree with Helene who sees it as a comment on our non-compassionate society. At the time of the witch hunts, that was possibly the height of that unfeeling culture. But today? If that were so, when are so abuses greeted with outrage?
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Very true. Context is important too. The key is learning from our mistakes of course…
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And I do believe, as a species, we are developing in the right direction. Though in every age we can point a finger and shudder
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I liked where you went with the story as it fitted the image well. It was a harsh time there s no doubt when women were accused of such things and killed because of it.
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Thank you for reading. That’s true, isn’t it?
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Indeed.
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Definitely a dark place. Well reflected in the prompt.
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Thank you!
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